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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hey it's part 3 ;)

Again I loved the part at the beginning as it shows she was quite a pessismt until a certain someone walked into her life ;)

Some slight confusion in this chapter. In the previous you say she's a Hufflepuff then in this one you say she attended sixth form. By this do you mean 6th and 7th year at Hogwarts or she did sixth form in a muggle school?

I noticed one small spelling errors Wales had an 'h' in it another than that the spelling was fine:)

I really thought this scene was adorable and how James wanted to cut in and Lydia being upset over her sister leaving. It's becoming a habit of James's to disappear straight after seeing her isn't it?;)

Overall I think this is a great story and I'll definitely read some when the next chapters are posted :D

Author's Response: Aw! Thank you so much! It's so sweet of you to keep reviewing. I'm glad you liked it, and to be honest, I'm not British and that entire school system REALLY confuses me, so I will have to look into that :) Thanks again, the next chapter is in the queue, and I'll probably post in your thread when it's validated :)

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