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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hey I'm back with part 2:)

I really love what you've done at the beginning of the chapter I was a bit confused by it last time but now I've seen it in the next I think it's great as it provides a perspective into Lydia's mind. I also feel it shows how much these so far brief encounters with James have changed her so much.

Considering it's such a small chapter you manage to include a lot of detail and description to make you connect with the reader:)

I quite enjoy how James pops up at the end of each chapter and it makes you wonder where their next encounter will take place. I liked how these have taken place in the muggle world as it shows that the wizarding population don't just stick to the wizarding world and do venture out at times.

I think the short chapter ideas are great as it keeps the attention of the reader and makes it short and sweet. Though you wanted in 500 words for each chapter you shouldn't neglect the story as a result of that, so I'm glad you kept those 100+ words as I don't really see where you could've lost them from :)

Author's Response: hehe! Thanks I'm so glad you liked it! I didn't think you were going to continue, but thanks for doing that! :) I just adore your reviews, thank you so much! :)

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