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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hey it's patronus_charm with your review!

I love reading Teddy/Victoire stories as they're such a cute couple so I've read quite a few and I have to say this was a fantastic twist! Even though I haven't read the prequel to this I could still understand what the plot was and it made me want to find out more about events prior to this and see what triggered them!

You described Victoire's pain so vividly you almost wanted to cry over the betrayal with her! It was such a big shock, because at first I was like isn't strange that Dom and Victoire are friends for once and then you find out what she did!

I thought that you captured Victoire's thoughts and personality very well and I could really believe in this story!

Overall I really enjoyed and I don't really feel there are any improvements to make! I'm off to read the prequel now ;D

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

I am glad you were intrigued by the story and understood the plot well.

I strive to write emotionally intense scenes and its good to know that you felt Vic's pain.

I worked hard on Vic's thoughts and personality so its a relief to know that you could believe it all.

Thanks a lot once again, and I'd love to know what you think of the prequel!


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