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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
Hi!

I don't know how I got here, but I managed to do so, and I'm happy that I did.

I ship Teddy/Victoire and I normally don't like them being split up in a story, especially if it was Dominique ruining their relationship. And to be honest, if I knew that it was going to happen with this, I wouldn't even have dared to read this. But because I didn't know that and I didn't read the previous one-shot 'Ending It', so I absolutely had no idea how things were going to turn out. Though, I should have had at least a vague idea of what it was going to be about when I read the title: Betrayal. I'm stupid, aren't I? D:

Enough with the rambling.

This has possibly been said to you a couple or more times, but this one-shot is AMAZING. Not just because its perfection -oh, how the start made me think that the story was finishing with a happy ending! Everything just flowed well so together and everything seemed so realistic! And the intensity of the story, from when Victoire read the letter, was radiating off my laptop screen. This is just...how can you be so perfect, Aditi?

But if anything, this story opened my eyes to the fact that all along I've been ignoring so many stories, not because they were bad, but just because I didn't like how things were going turn out. I'm stupid and shallow! Jeez, can I get anymore worse? O.o

From now on, I promise to read more Dom/Teddy fanfics and I won't cringe anymore when I see a ship I love being split into half. D:

~Izzy

Sorry if the review didn't make sense. My brain's a bit of a mess. :|

PS: Is there going to be a continuation to this? ;)

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I am quite curious as to how you got here though xP

Haha no you aren't stupid, not at all! I am glad you decided to read this anyway though :)

I am smiling so big right now, thanks to your big "Amazing" there!! Thank you!! It's perfection? Really? Merlin, you're totally overdoing the flattery :P *blushes* Naw I am not perfect, but nevertheless, thank you so much. I am sooo happy that you liked this story so much and think its perfect-ish! It means a lot to me!

Naw don't blame yourself. Those kind of things happen to everyone. But yeah, you should definitely not let go of the opportunity to explore "different" stories from now on :)

*giggle* you're so funny, really. But I hope you enjoy the Dom/Teddy fics. For starters, you can read the prequel to this, its called "Ending It" and its Dom/Teddy's POV! And takes place before Betrayal =) *shameless self promotion*

Your review made a lot of sense and gave me lots of happiness! Kudos! Thanks a ton!!

And as of now, I don't think there'll be a continuation to this, but maybe in a few months I might get a plunny to turn this into a trilogy and may write something of a continuation xD

THANK YOU FOR YOUR LOVELY REVIEW

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