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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hey it's part 4 of your review!

I found it was an interesting twist you left us on last time with Remus so I was interested to see how you continued on with it. I think you continued it on very well and I think it was a great idea to introduce new side effects to his 'furry little problem'.

I liked the brief scene with Narcissa and Lucius it was quite different to other stories I've read about them but I still think it worked well. I liked the fact that the entire school new about their relationship as they were possibly the pureblood royalty.

One pointer is possibly include more depth to the characters. As I sometimes feel that what Remus says and does a bit disconnected so try and reallign this.

Other than that it was really good job. Sorry I can't say much as I've already said it in the other reviews. Kiana x

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