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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hey it's me again;D I almost don't want to leave reviews as I just want to carry on with the story but I'll make myself wait a few minutes to read the next chapter to leave a review!

Despite not having sub headings to show the change in POV this time around I actually found the transition smoother possibly as you carried on with story straight away. It was really good that you made the person immediatly identifiable to avoid confusion.

I think both of the groups of friends interact well with each other. I particularly enjoyed that little discussion between Remus and Millie as it let us know a bit more about both.

I liked the way you made parrallels between Millie and Sirius so you could see even though they have remarkable similarities Millie still tries to deny it and still dislikes him.

I think is a great retelling of the Marauder's time at Hogwarts!

Author's Response: I actually forgot to add subheadings in the first few chapters - I'm fixing that in the edits, because I know it becomes difficult to follow otherwise, as one tries to figure out who's talking.

The Millie and Remus discussion was so difficult to write! I just couldn't get it to sound right! So I'm really pleased that you liked it!

And yeah. I figured that being purebloods, they probably had really similar upbringings, so it was pretty important to underscore that. The thing with Lily and James' relationship is that they're just so different, background wise, that I thought it would be interesting to see where a relationship between people with such similar backgrounds would go!

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