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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hi it's patronus_charm with your review! I laughed when I saw you requested as I read this at 2 in the morning and I was going to review but it would have been terrible as I was falling asleep over my laptop! Oh well here it is now ;D

I really enjoyed reading this from Scorpius's persepctive as it's usually from Rose's so it can get a little boring so reading this was a refreshing change. I liked how Scorpius was rather funny as he tends to lean towards the more moody and mysterious side. I enjoyed seeing what he was thinking as it connected well with his actions.

I also really liked what you did with Rose and you couldn't help but feel sorry for 'the one Weasley no one liked'. You just wanted to become her friend she was a really endearing character and it was nice to see her become more confident and lively as the chapter went on.

I found the story was also believable which is very important for a one shot as they often don't have the chance to develop as much as novel's.

Albus, though he barely appeared in it provided some good comedic elements especially his reaction at the end.

Overall the only pointer is possibly give more description just to make you feel more connected but it's really good so there isn't really much to improve on. Just one last thing I loved the use of muggle knowledge of going to Asda as I felt it just made it more speciall. I really enjoyed reading!

Author's Response: Hey there! I promise it was only like, 6 in the evening my time! :) Thank you so much for the review! I will certainly go back and reread it to see where I could place more description, thanks for the help, your review was awesome!

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