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Review:MrsJaydeMalfoy says:
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Wow. This is a very emotional piece; really heart-wrenching (in a good way!). This is a fairly short one-shot, but there was so much detail and emotion here that it felt like I'd read a much longer piece! My favorite part of the entire thing was when you said that Snape realized he didn't deserve Lily's forgiveness: it really points towards the internal battle going on inside him and I think that fits perfectly.

I've read several Snape/Lily fics before, but in all honesty, this is the FIRST one that's made me wonder "What if Snape had married Lily? Would HE have been Harry's father, or would Harry have even existed?" I have NO idea why, unless it's got something to do with the strong emotions I'm feeling from reading this! And that, my dear, is the mark of an incredibly well-written piece!

I didn't see any spelling or grammar issues, and it all flowed wonderfully. A really, REALLY great one-shot! 10/10!

Author's Response: OMG this review! Seriously, I dont really know what to say but I'll try! I meant for this piece to be sad and very emotional. I was also going for the 500 word challenge which would explain its length. I'm so glad you feel I did a good job with Snapes characterization! Thats huge for me! Gah I really don't know what else to say because your review just has me so happy and excited and GAH! Thank you so much for this absolutely amazing review!

~Slytherinchica08~


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