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Review:radicallyali says:
Uhg I love Drew Barrymore. Good choice for Hermione.

Scorpius knows somethings up. Because as weíve already established, Rose is a terrible liar. I wonder who this raven haired girl is. Iím excited to find out.

Scorpius you canít just sneak into girls rooms. This isnít Clarissa Explains It All.

ďCame to make sure you were okay.Ē
In the middle of the night?
Oh Scorpius.

D=

Rose you always seem to be in the wrong place at the wrong time.

Oh hey, Ali.

I canít imagine having a sick mother. It would absolutely destroy me. Iím surprised Scorpius went this long without breaking infront of someone. And he sprung back so fast I think that itís hurting him a lot lot worse than heís letting on, even with that short breakdown.

ďBrilliant.Ē He grabbed my leg, met my eyes for just a second, and pulled me underwater.
So in love.

ďI was watching your eyes the whole time, Malfoy,Ē I called. ďDonít think I didnít catch you.Ē
Shoot gurl. You got him good that time.

What I wasnít expecting, however, were three people sitting at the table staring at me. Hugoís face went red.
Jeez hugo.

ďInto what? One of your nighties? Iíll pass. Thanks anyway.Ē
That would be a sight to see.

Letís all just carry watermelons.
Omg Iím dying right now.

ďYou have to balance doing things for other people with doing things for yourself.Ē
Sounds like a little Janice wisdom seeping into the story ;) True though.

ďThen Iíll just have to win them over, wonít I?Ē?
So youíre going to share a bed again arenít you? You little minx ;)

8735645/10
AliCat

Author's Response: Thank you! I really think she fits what I think Hermione would look like at that age.

Rose really is a horrific liar. Work on that, girl.

At least he didn't use a ladder.

Scorpius is hurting a LOT more than he lets on. That's why he needs to get away. He has been hurting for years and it has started to numb him.

I love when Rose calls him out.

Hugo you are a turd.

It really would be. Next chapter image?

I love the watermelon lines. One of my faves.

I do like to put my own wisdom in here. Maybe someone will take something out of it. WISDOMNESS.

hehe.

Thanks :)


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