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Review:radicallyali says:
Oh hey Ron. Oh hey.

Hid awkward belt loops? That’s a new one.

I hate thunderstorms. Hate hate hate. When my ex and I were together I would make him come over when it was thunder storming because I could not stand it.

James forced him out into more storms and he became numb to them and even started to like them.

“We can like … keep each other warm or something.”
You should see the smirk on my face right now omg I love this. I love fluff.

Scorpius’ fingers trailed up my arm absently. “So am I.”

What had I gotten myself into?

I feel like if this was a musical she would sing “I won’t say I’m in love” from Hercules. She reminds me of Meg kind of. Strong, doesn’t need a man, feisty, doesn’t want to admit to herself that she has feelings for someone, etc etc.

Uhg. Teenagers. (As if I don’t still act like this sometimes.)

I stepped back, suddenly confused. I knew Scorpius had no siblings. And he didn’t mention coming with anyone on vacation. Who was this girl?
Someone is a little jealous methinks.



Author's Response: Listen. Shh.

I gave Rose my fear of thunderstorms. Okay, to be clear I don't fear THUNDERSTORMS. I fear Tornados. But all the same. Same thing.

James would. Any of my James' would.

Fluff is hilarious. I was so pained writing that entire scene. I was like NO I CAN'T BUT IT'S FLUFF DO IT BUT NO.

She really does remind me of Meg but with less spitfire. Good comparison. let's watch Hercules.

You are a teenager. Secretly.

Pfft. So am I. Sometimes.


Thanks :)

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