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Review:radicallyali says:

Hugo is such a little troublemaker and he’s going to continue to be throughout the rest of this I can tell.

Scorpius totally has the one-up on Rose right now. I feel like she’s going to try to get ahead of Scorpius and it’s not going to work.

They just have great banter and Scorpius never misses a beat with Rose. I love their chemistry together. It’s great.

“Guess who discovered the town?” “Your brother?”

He shrugged, but wasn’t looking at me.
Hiding something.

I would love to see that waterfall. Omg.

It wasn’t until about halfway down that I realized what he had been doing.
Sometimes I feel like Scorpius knows Rose better than she knows herself.

“Let’s go, Juliet,” he teased, ruffling his hair and starting into the trees.
Yeah I’m pretty sure if I was in Rose’s position I would be like what the heck is my life right now.

We were friends and I shouldn’t be looking at him (or thinking about him) like that when we had just chatted about our life goals and I whacked him with a catfish.
Aaaaha ha hahaha ROSE YOU’RE SO STUPID.

Omg Scorpius encountering ketchup and mustard for the first time. Omg. What a deprived child.

I hope Rose spends the rest of the story trying to recreate this sunset. I feel like its something she would do.

Excuse me while Scorpius Malfoy sleeps on my bloody leg.
Omg I’m cackling. I think this was the perfect way to end this chapter. It was getting all deep and then Scorp starts cuddling with her thigh. Perf.

I hope this little surprise of a review made your day ;)


PS remember that one time I gave you’re a 9/10 just to be a butthead?


Author's Response: WHOA WHAT IS THIS MAGIC.

Hugo will continue to be a brat, yes.

Rose should learn she probably won't have the one-up for a while. She doesn't have the guts for it yet.

I love their banter. It's so natural because neither wants to lose or stand down.

Yes indeed. Hiding indeed.

Scorpius does. As a deflection from his own head.

Look at Rose. In denial. How cute.

He really was. Poor Scorp. Stahp.

It really is something she would do. It's something she isn't going to be able to erase from her mind.

Omg I forgot about that time you gave me a 9/10 and now I remember and we're in a friendship timeout again just because it was mean.


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