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Review:gingersnape says:
Hi Chris! This was so much fun to read! I was poking around for something funny and couldn't believe that this didnít have many reviews, so I couldn't pass it up. (And boy am I glad I didn't!)

Your ideas for pranks had me smiling the whole way through - the kitchen prank was really original, the swamp filled me with happiness at the memories of the first swamp (the rafts were a really good idea too - I'm glad the teachers got an excuse to leave it up! :D), and the poor predicament the ghosts were in was a great way to make the enchantments a little more amusing without getting anyone in real trouble.

I found your use of a large group of pranksters really interesting because you usually only see one or two people involved, or occasionally three. While it was difficult for me to keep track of who was who, I thought the diversity of the pranksters added a really positive element to the story. I only wish I had more time to learn about who everyone was, but with so many character in such a small story, I thought you characterized everyone very well and made them all different enough to have funny quirks I liked seeing throughout the story.

I noticed a few spelling and grammar mistakes, but for the most part, everything was very well edited. There were mostly missing commas and in this sentence: "As she climbed off the boat into the Dining Hall, she could hear the other students whispering and discussing the other remarkable things they'd woken too." the "too" should be "to." :)

Overall, I thought this worked the meme in very well and I really enjoyed reading about the different pranks and their amusing methods of sneaking around after hours with such a large group, as you made the necessary precautions a very funny part of the story, especially with Isla's contribution! :)

Annie

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