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Review:MargaretLane says:
The question about who would eat something with "kidney" in it's name amused me.

A hot dog eating contest? *dies laughing* Yeah, right, like eating less than Lucy really proves he's a poor boyfriend. They do come up with the most insane things.

It's would probably be better to put a full stop after Killian says "Sure I do" instead of a comma, since he doesn't exactly smile what he is saying.

Love the detail about the first years climbing up on the tables.

I also like the insight we get into the personality of the commentator.

Honestly, though, it'd be pretty nasty and spiteful to try and ruin your cousin's relationship just because her boyfriend doesn't eat enough.

When you've written "Louis never mumbles", you've run "Louisnever" all in together.

And wow, I hope that wasn't true. That would be dreadful - eating poorly transfigured slugs.

Molly is clever though, to get Killian to win the challenge that way. That was an amusing solution. I was expecting him to just best them in each of the challenges, but I think this is better, because it means they aren't all just ending the same way.

That comment about measuring how much they've each eaten if they stop at the same one amused me for some reason. Just how seriously they are taking this, I guess.

When Killian is finishing his sixth hot dog, you've said that "the crow now encourages him loudly", rather than "the crowd".

And in the following paragraph, you've written "Killian Earhart has begun IS seventh hot dog" instead of "his".

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