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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hey it's patronus_charm with your review :)

I was immediatly interested in reading this straight from the summary as I feel the time period after the war is often one over looked so I was glad to read this:)

I thought your story captured the post-war feeling perfectly the sense of melancholy was great and you almost wanted to start crying and grieving with them!

I thought you captured Harry's mindset brilliantly. The fact that he was feeling guilty over the others deaths when really it wasn't his fault as exactly what you imagined him to be thinking.

The whole idea of them doing their patronuses in memory of Fred was great as I thought it was a pefect way of remembering him. You almost wanted to join and just say 'expecto patronum' as well!

Sometimes you forget to capitalize things once with Harry and when you said The Burrow as it was capitalized in the book :)

Overall I thought it was a great start and you did retain my interest ;D As I have time on my hands I'll do the next chapter as well :)

Kiana x

Author's Response: Thank you so much for going into so much depth! I'll have a proof read of all of the chapters just to smooth out any more errors that I can find.

Thank you!

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