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Review:Kenneth Newton says:
Wonderful! Please update this story soon. Just as a recommendation, how about having the group get into a situation with a gang of snatchers? They were around at that time, right? They could mistake Al for Harry and get all excited. And then have Ron mysteriously appear, because he ran into snatchers in the Deathly Hallows. Thus starting their journey to find Harry and Hermione and get back home! Also, try just a little more depth in your characters and more description in their thoughts. It will really help their development!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking the story so far! ^^ Well, there are only two chapters so far, so what makes you think I won't have them be captured by snatchers? I've already planned out the story in my notebook, so I won't be making any changes. I don't think it would make sense to have the trio meet their future children, though. But I like the idea! Thanks so much for reviewing! :)


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