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Review:Jchrissy says:
MOMO BEAT ME HERE. UGH.

Whatevs. I'll get her on the next chapter.

I'm either going to be extremely naive or extremely optimistic... but I will not believe he's using again. Could someone have done something to set him up? Switch the sugar for his tea??? I mean, like Rose said he does act a bit erratic sometimes, but it just seems like him and not any substance inducing that.

I can't decide what's worse. what she actually walked into or what I was thinking was happening. When no one answered the door and she heard those sounds though... I was so afraid there was going to be someone in there with him. Like he was trying to push her away from him by making sure she'd see him with another woman... what she walked into wasn't much better, but at least it wasn't Gigi.

Becky you have no idea how much I wish I could give you CC in this review. You give me so much helpful advice, and your AN asking for suggestions for improvement really wish I could do that, and I've read through this chapter a second time trying to kind of detach myself and see if there was anything.. but i just couldn't find anything. You write so, so beautifully.. your characters personalities are vivid, realistic, and stay constant throughout the story... and you're just such a talented story teller.

This chapter was so intense and you just want to take all these people away and hug them and put them in a happy perfect world.

I can't wait to find out what happens next... and I can't WAIT until you write an OF. I can tell you that I'm going to be one of the first people in line to buy your book.

Author's Response: That sneaky momo!

Call it whatever you like, I'm just glad you like Krum enough to hold out hope for him. I shan't spoil it, but this isn't the last of this incident we shall see, me thinks. And it's so funny you mention that. I actually had Rose thinking the same thing before she flung open the door (I wrote it all out and everything), but I couldn't get it right without her sounding jealous, and that just didn't fit her character. I'll leave the jealousy to Krum. But you aren't wrong about Krum. He is eventually going to try and push her away. You just know he can't help himself.

Gah! Really, you are too good to me with your reviews. I need to find someone who really enjoys giving harsh feedback just to keep my ego in check. Thank you so much for continuing to read and review. I swear there are times when I'm writing a scene and I have to stop myself from PM-ing you to talk about!

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