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Review:TheHeirOfSlytherin says:
Hey!

So, I saw this was updated a while ago and told myself I'd read it later that day, then had to do other things and was busy. Here now.

I love their little group, all equally bright and talented in their own right. They balance each other out nicely. Even if one of them is bad - yeah, I think it's one in the group. I'll get back to that.

Aaron and Hugo need to be together forever. I'll be very sad if anything were to happen to them. I love Lily's sly comments and glances and Hugo held his hand. Awww!

I'm intrigued by Louis - but Louis is an intriguing character :P (love him!). I can't wait to find out why he's so intrigued by Aaron. Although, why wouldn't you? He's a half-vampire. :D

So, the bad guy. I think, so far, that it's Lily or Anna. Reasons:

Lily - Insanely smart, especially at Potions, and I bet she could actually pull it off. The bad guy POV mentioned Hugo and Aaron being cute and she's right there, she could see the hand-holding... Maybe. Part of me hopes this is wrong; it would be awesomely ironic for the Savior's daughter to be bad and bring back what Harry destroyed, but part of me just doesn't see her as bad. She'll use her talents for fun, not evil.

Anna - You always watch out for the quiet ones. A given, really. And she 'guiltily' looks at Hugo like she has a crush, but could just be using that to distract from what she's really planning. And she looked at him when talking about getting inside a person's head. If I were going to take over the world, I'd wanna get inside the head of someone talented and smart, too. And she could use her crush and looking at Hugo to notice their relationship (going back to bad guy POV thinking them cute). She's perfect really. If I'm wrong, I'd be surprised.

I can't wait to find out.

Awesome chapter. Love it. You've got me hooked on this story. :D

Sam.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing. :) Sorry it's taken so long to reply and get another chapter up. Stupid exams. I'm glad you're liking it and have your own theories (though I won't tell you which ones are correct 0.o) So please keep reading and make suggestions if you notice anything or want anything else. :)

Asher

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