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Review:Secret Santa says:
Santa has been bit busy helping other Santas, but since I quite like your one-shots, here's one more review before I close my shop for a year and steer my reindeers back to the North Pole. :)

It was very fluffy and cute one-shot. I love how naturally you represent the Marauders. Sirius tricking Remus to help him fix the motorcycle and Remus grumbling when he realized that. Teenage Remus is so adorable and bit nerdy. Aww. It's really a shame that even he and Tonks didn't survive the war. Sirius's exuberance brimming over when Peter brings food was really cute too. It's a good thing Hogwarts has so well-stocked kitchens. Teenage boys and their tummies. :)

I liked how peaceful surroundings you created for this one-shot. And the changing the gifts scene was incredibly cute. It would be very like Lily to find a rare spellbook for him. It also showed how much she respects the fact that he's very good with transfiguration, if she's sure that he has a chance to win the award for it. I want the charm like that too! And a moon and a paw print, and even a little rat now that we're in it.

It was very lovely Christmas story. I'm very happy to be a first reviewer. Thank you for being a gracious Santee. I wish you the very best New Year and now, Dasher, Comet and Blixem! Let's fly back to the North!

Your Secret Santa :)

Author's Response: Oh my God, you're my favourite. God, I wish I could visit the North Pole. Granted, it'd be freezing, but awesome none-the-less.

I wrote it for the Jily Secret Santa Exchange on Tumblr, where I was given a fluffy and already dating as prompts. I had the worst time writing it, but I liked how it turned out in the end. Fluff is hard. D:

I wish Remus and Tonks had survived. I really do. Teddy is such an adorable character, and deserved to have his parents around. Plus, they would have been awesome parents.

Trying to find a gift for James is a pain. I didn't want to get him anything broomstick related, because that always seems a bit cliche to me, but at the same time, I had to try and find something that Lily would be happy to purchase. I figured a rare spellbook would work well. The charm was completely by accident; I was just typing away when suddenly, BAM! He'd given her a charm, but I liked it so much it stuck around, haha.

I'm really glad you liked this, and I'm thrilled that it got a review, let along such a lovely one from such a lovely person. Thank you for being such a gracious Santa! Happy New Year to you, too. Don't get lost in a blizzard!

- A ^_^


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