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Review:11whimsy says:
Ok! I finished reading. And to be honest, I actually really liked it! It's fun and original and you have a great, relatable voice for the characters. I am especially becoming fond of Albus. You've done a great job developing him :) This is one of those good quality stories that is just waiting for more people to notice it. I'll try to get recommended on the forums :) Anyhow, criticism... hmm maybe longer chapters and smoother transitions? I struggle with those too, they can be tricky little things but they can really help a story flow. But all in all, good work. You should be proud. Cause this is a high quality piece of literature. Keep it up! I can't wait for Lewis and Potter to continue interacting... **i love stories like that :D***

Author's Response: Hey...first, thank you for reading my story and reviewing it :) I'm really glad you liked it so much...and I am working on the longer chapters and smoother transitions...I did put up the next chapter, so please continue to read and review...I'm gonna bring more of Al's and Layla's interactions in the upcpoming chapters, so please let me know how you like it and if it needs any fine-tuning...again, thanks for reading the story and reviewing!!
xoxo ;)

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