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Review:ChaosWednesday says:
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This is quite a bold jump right ito Draco's mind and his thoughts about his own recent transformation. Looks like he has learned the error of his ways and made a 180 character turn. I'm curious how you will take it further :)

I would advise you to re-read this for typos and spelling mistakes. Sometimes you forget a period or write "there" instead of "their". It's not big deal, but these things do stand out. Also, maybe add some action in between Draco's musings? For example,where he is as he is thinking this, or what has just happened. Some connection to reality is a good way to introduce a character. Otherwize, you run the danger of seeming like this isnt part of the story but mroe a prologue that is intended to redeem Draco as soon as possible, you know what I mean?

Anyways, good luck :)

Author's Response: Yeah I need to check out those spelling mistakes ;) Thanks for the great advice and review!

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