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Review:Courtney Dark says:
I must admit, I've always had a soft spot for stories with Theodore Nott in them, which is what made me decide to read this! I have to say, it was very different to what I was expecting-but not in a bad way!

Audrey is very cute. You have written her just perfectly, and I like the mother-daughter relationship between she and Tracey that you have already started developing. One of my favourite scenes in this chapter was when they were making pancakes together...and the flour fight that followed. It was a nice little detail in this chapter that put a smile on my face and made everything seem so much more realistic.

That's another thing I liked about this chapter-the realism of it all. Each of the characters, especially Tracey, seemed so...human, as ridiculous as that sounds! There is nothing fancy about her life, and the way you described everything, especially all the little details, like the clothes she wore and the descriptions on her flat added to this. I also like the way you developed Tracey's character throughout the story through what she wears, her actions and what she says. It was much more effective than if you'd just described her in one paragraph.

Overall, I thought this was a great first chapter. Good job!

Author's Response: I think when people first pick up this story, they are thinking that Theodore Nott is actually the father and it will go over that, but he is not. I'm glad you felt that my relationship of Tracey and Audrey were cute and enjoyable to read! I dont have kids of my own so its always nice to hear people say that they liked the way I characterized them. Gah I made them human! That is such an amazing compliment to get! Thank you so much for this amazing review!


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