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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
Hello!

Its Gabbie here with your requested review! I got here super quick, didn't I? :D
So, this was interesting. I've read alot of Dramione, I'm not going to lie but not alot of them take Draco's POV in this direction and it was a bit startling. The fact that he was so different from the horror that I've known so well from the books was teh first thing that I noticed. At first, I wasn't able to quite believe it but as he went on, talking about Burbage's death, I started to understand a little. The fear of it all had changed him for the better and I'm glad that it helped push him towards the good side. I'm not sure if I can believe, from how he acted in the HP books to not hate Muggles as much as his dead. Or perhaps he was merely doing what he thought his father wanted? That could be a possibility from what you've hinted at here in this chapter. I've seen alot of different versions of his parent's relationship and I think you've gone for more of the emotional trauma, versus something more physical, which I wouldn't have been able to stand. The hint of abuse with Draco was a little off putting too because let's be honest, no kid deserves that and I had to remind myself that no, I could not go and find Lucius and punch him in the face. Hahahha.
So, his thoughts on The Golden Trio were pretty shocking, I have to say. From thinking about Harry as more of an equal and then, owing Ron and Hermione for testifying his innocence? I wasn't expecting that and I had to reread that! The War changed quite a few things, especially with how Ron is basking in the limelight. Hm. I have a feeling you'll play on that later on, Draco seemed to think about his relationship with Hermione for longer than I thought he would. :3
Hehehe.
The only CC's I can give you is that there were some run on sentences that you should think of putting breaks in. Other than that, I'm curious about this Draco that you've built yourself and I can't wait to see what you do with his family's status situation. Oh, how he does not want to marry Astoria Greengrass...his mother will not be pleased to hear that! And, that showed some depth to his character, he's not nearly as shallow as I might have thought and the War has obviously left him scarred and given him some maturity. I really enjoyed reading that about him! ;)
So, thanks for the great read and keep it up!
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: Thanks for the review and I'm glad you liked it! Yeah I was surprised by the quick turn around but thanks for it:) Yeah I think I may edit the bit about him being so pro-muggle as it doesn't completly suite him. Thanks again!

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