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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
HellO!

Hey, its Gabbie here with your requested review! Coming at you pretty quickly too, if I do say so myself so, since we've never spoken before, its nice to meet you! :D
So, to be honest, I have heard of this pairing loosely on the forums but have never given one a chance. I just found the thought of Tom and Minnie (Cutest nickname ever by the way) to be the strangest thing. And yet, after reading this, oddly addicting adn I can see why you liked writing them together! Those first few opening sentences were so powerful, I really loved how you set up the rest of the chapter. It gave me a sense of a twisted desire that couldn't be understood by Minerva and that was a side of her that I'd never seen. I really enjoyed it, to be honest. To see her losing her inhibitions and actually listening to Tom, being fooled by that smile...it read like every girl's thoughts at some point. I think everyone can relate but not quite in the way Minerva can at having the man she loves turning into a monster right befor her eyes. Loved it! :D
There were like, two grammar things in here with "she as built," and "spoked" but they were minor. I would say, that, though you might want to go and take care of a few run on sentences (I make a ton of them myself so I really can't talk) since her thoughts constantly shift on to a different topic. But other than that, I thought this was lovely and so achingly sad, considering that I felt that she still loved Tom, underneath it all. His plea for help has me wondering, was he being honest? Had he come to her as a last result? Had she let him down by not helping? Argh, the questions...you've got me wondering on where you're going to go with this! :D
I really think that you should keep going, is such a different pairing from the norm. :D I'll see you on the forums, yes? And I'll most likely gush about you on my review thread so be warned. :D
Much love and thanks for the great read!
Gabbie

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