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Review:sweet_lovely_girl says:
sweetlovelygirl here with your requested review.
First I have to tell you that this story is really amazing and touching. Everything is written perfectly.
You asked me in your request whether I think I have the need to read the prequel before this story and to be honest: I already read and reviewed the prequel story before for the review tag. So I can't really answer your question on that. But if I just think about it, I think readers could do without reading the prequel first, but I highly recommend reading the preequel because that was also an amazing and perfect short story!
Now about your characters. I think Teddy was being so selfish when he was having the affair with Dom. And he was so stupid for writing a LETTER about their affair! Ugh, can't stand him. (Haha, sorry for my opinion about him, but I really find it hard to like him now.)
Dominique is very well-written just like herr sister, although I still can't believe she would have an affair with her sister's man!
I hate it that there isn't a happy ending in this story. But that doesn't mean this isn't great. I especially
liked this sentence: 'How could she have let love make her weak enough to hurt her sister this way?' It's so brilliant and beautiful. Just like the rest of the story.
Thank you for letting me read this!
-Xxx- SLG

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

I feel so flattered that you find my story 'amazing and touching' and 'written perfectly'. Thank you!

I am glad to hear that you liked my prequel too and would recommend it to others.

Haha Teddy was definitely selfish and stupid, no doubt. And that's okay, I wasn't aiming for the readers to really like Teddy anyway.

I am glad you like Dom and Vic's characterisations.

I put in a lot of thoughts while writing such thoughts of characters so good to know you liked that line!

Thanks again!

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