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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
I've always wanted to write a story about this so when I saw yours, I just had to read it! I thought this was a great place to start, it tells your readers exactly why he had decided to join Voldemort even if it wasn't completely what he wanted which also leaves room for him to change as time goes on as he didn't want it in the first place but didn't want to disappoint family. I liked your description throughout the chapter and the beginning paragraph had caught my attention right away. I noticed a few mistakes such as leaving off the words a/the (which ever it is that you would want to use)which would go before the word teapot. Other than that though I didn't notice anything else. This was a great beginning to your story! Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~

Author's Response: Hi! Thank you for the review. =)

I like to start my stories in middle of the scene, it seems to make my stories flow better. And in this case it definitely is the moment when Reg's life is permanently changed, which kind of propels this story forward.

I think I've to reread this story with a critical eye, there seems to be mistakes here and there. Thank you for pointing it out.

I'm glad you liked it and hoping that you'll stop by and read more of it in the future. =)

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