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Review:PolyJuice_ says:
HEY SAM. So I promised to actually write this review as I would if you were a stranger. I mean, the reviews I've been writing you have been really lazy and I write them in less than five minutes, and I usually just skim the chappie to see what the top four points are and then do loads of nonsensical keyboard-slamming. I figure you take enough time to write these, I should probably write a proper review. :p


Everything about your story draws me in, from the dry humour of Alexa to Albus' and his over-cautiousness. Not only are your characters unique and all that jazz, but the actual story is something else. You've taken what is, I admit, a pretty common, basic theme: teen pregnancy, and you've turned it into something all-new and grabbing.

Albus bringing out the pregnancy test just made me think "ALBUS. GIVE IT A REST." But then, knowing what I know, secretly thank him. Though the feeling of wanting to hit him returns when he jokes about him being a good parent. Oh, Albus. If Sam didn't portray you as adorably cute..well..I'd find you awfully annoying. But she did, so I don't.

I'm really starting to like Alexa's dad too. Totally reminds me of my best friends Mum. :p

So the long and short of this stupidly short review that actually made sense (well..sort of) and didn't have random thoughts here and there with little fan-girl-esque shrieks is that it's a fantastic story, and you deserve every single one of the (NOW) seventy reviews on it. Keep writing, and I'll keep reviewing.


(eehh, not bad, eh? It had paragraphs! And sentences! Holy beep!)


Author's Response: HEY LIZ!

Has it really been three years since you reviews this? Damn, I'm so bad at this. And it's a proper review from you and everything.

I'm glad you think so, because tackling teen pregnancy was a new personal challenge for me.

Haha. Oh, Albus. Such an overthinker. You can think he's annoying if you want to. He totally is... annoyingly cute. Damn him. :P

Everyone loves Theo.

Thank you so much for leaving a review, Liz!

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