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Review:Serendipity1234 says:
I like Louis a lot now, actually. He was really sweet in this chapter ❤ though I am a little suspicious about him bringing her a bottle of wine, of all things. Haha.
But he was really cute -I loved when he moved her hair out of her face and kissed her, and kept holding her, and taking care of her -just so, so cute.
I sympathize with Ava but I also think she's kind of dumb...but that's probably because she's a bit of an emotional wreck right now, poor thing.
So far my theories about Ian are mostly that eventually what other people thought started to matter and maybe something to do with her being a witch. Like the negative comments and thoughts from people like his parents and friends and associates were wearing on their relationship. And perhaps he didn't react well when she told him she was a witch? I wonder if she ever told him...what happens if you tell a muggle girlfriend or boyfriend about magic and then break up? Do they obliviate the muggle? Or just let them keep that knowledge anyway and then obliviate them if they start to make trouble?
Anyway I also feel bad for Louis because he clearly cares about her and probably/possibly wants to date her, but she's calling him 'Ian' while they hook up. That's really sad... It also probably complicates their relationship because how will he know if she ever likes him back genuinely or is just hung up on Ian?
Update soon :)

Author's Response: Aw, I'm glad :) He is quite the sweetie deep down. And the wine thing was /definitely/ intended as a sort of tongue-in-cheek joke, I assure you.
He was pretty adorable, wasn't he?
She did act rather dumb in this chapter, but she's not normally a dumb person. She makes stupid decisions, but it's nothing to do with her intelligence level. Most of it actually can be ascribed to her emotional distress right now, as you thought.
Interesting thoughts... but I can't reveal anything. :P But I /will/ say that there is a lot more about Ian in the next chapter, so you'll be learning whether or not you're correct on those points.
Louis :( It is rather unfortunate for him that he's so much like her ex. The whole bit about calling him Ian was definitely sad for him, but I think I feel even worse for Ava.
The next chapter is in the queue :)
Thank you so much for the lovely review ♥

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