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Review:Jchrissy says:
Hi there! Thank you for making my heart turn into a little pile of broken feels ;(.

I'm going to try and explain well what I'm talking about during this because I doubt I'll be able to go in chronological order.

The funeral. It makes so much sense but is so terrible... no one but him knows he's 'fred'... he's turned himself into himself basically but he hasn't and it's so terrible but he's so broken and so messed up that he doesn't see it. Or he does and just doesn't let himself feel it. It's a terrible, terrible joke but inside his head it's perfect and I think you made such an amazing decision by using that, and am very impressed with the creativity of it all. Even if it's heart crushing.

Molly cleaning, fixing, handling... just like she does best. I think her sense of stability was very necessary for the erratic emotions of George through this.

George lost so much of himself, just destroyed and taken away forever, and I think the style you wrote it in, with the fragments and the parts that feel like they go fast then slow then fast... it all just worked in an amazing way to bring George's feelings so up close and painful intimate that they were some of the most painful I've ever read.

This was such a wonderful short story, incredibly painful, but gorgeously written.

Author's Response: Hi again Jami :D

Congrats, you've sat through every chapter of this story so far; that's quite an achievement xD

No, really, thank you so so so much for your wonderful comments on my story so far. Your reviews are just too lovely!

I'm so glad that I've managed to make you feel for George; I'm glad that the fragments and the style didn't put you off - and that you actually thought they worked!

This isn't actually a short story bahaha; I've got to change that part. I think it's more of a novella - have sketched a few chapters in my mind - and will get down to writing them soon! ...once I take care of all the other oneshot plunnies assaulting me...

So thank you so much once again! Always love your reviews :D

-teh


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