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Review:FallenAmaranth says:
Hi! Here with your review! :)

I think it's really interesting to read something from Draco's point of view after the war.

The only thing I disliked was Draco's view of his relationship with his father, because I always liked to believe that Lucius cared quite a lot for his family - they only ever really had each other, especially in the war. However, those are my thoughts and I am understanding of the fact that everybody has different ideas, and I think you wrote this one very well(especially since I have only just read a one-shot about the Malfoy family which was completely different!)

Draco seemed a little too, "sudden-nice-good-guy" when he stated that he never liked the whole muggle hating thing, because I'm sure he did at some point, yet his thoughts of Harry and Dumbledore were quite realistic, and the reasons he gave that he lied about knowing Harry at the manor.

I thought it was quite well written and could lead to a good and interesting tale - I am intrigued to know what happens with Astoria, especially what with his thoughts about Hermione ;)

-Emily

Author's Response: Thanks for the review,:) yeah I was unsure about draco being against the muggle killings so I may change it so he doesn't sound too nice:) I'm glad you found it different as I didn't want it to be too similar to other stories!

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