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Review:AriesGirl40 says:
awesome offering. I could see Rose breaking it off with Toby, I just didn't see him doing it first. I can see Toby strutting around all noble in the beginning, standing aside for true love to happen is a noble thing, but I can also see him slowly becoming bitter because he doesn't have a Scorpius and Rose relationship of his own. Hecould resort to throwing a few sticks and stones in their path. Or maybe he isn't bypolor and lets them be. Wizards are a funny breed.You never know how things are going to go in the end :)

Merry Christmas and hope you has a wonderful New Year!

Author's Response: Thanks! It may have been a bit unconventional to let Toby end it first, but I really felt bad that I had to end his relationship! I had to give him something to hold onto! ;) I'm not entirely sure yet what reaction he'll have towards Rose and Scorpius, because I'll focus more on the two main people involved and how they deal with it. Perhaps in two more chapters I'll revisit him and maybe I'll give him a happy ending... ;)
Thanks for reading and reviewing (and the same to you)!


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