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Review:Sinead ( romance4ever ) says:
My apologies dark whisper the review got cut short for some reason im unaware of
I had left this poem for you as a number of times it has helped me grieve
"Do not stand at my grave and weep
I am not there. I do not sleep.
I am a thousand winds that blow.
I am the diamond glints on snow.
I am the sunlight on ripened grain.
I am the gentle autumn rain.
When you awaken in the morning's hush
I am the swift uplifting rush
Of quiet birds in circled flight.
I am the soft stars that shine at night.
Do not stand at my grave and cry;
I am not there. I did not die."
I hope it offers you some help in this time

Now I shall return to the story itself ... It's utterly fantastically simple and perfect. You've done it again with capturing the innocence of people and the true characters ESP my favourite narcissa.. You've done so well with her as I always feel she was hiding pain behind her coveted face and deep down she was falling apart but remains strong for everyone else especially for her husband and child which I must applaud you've captured his temperament perfectly as well as what I love to read is the romance and love between a married couple in love I always feel they are in love and not battling a hidden war many people make them out to be ... For who else would notice their perfect wife falter if they were not in love and who else would plead with their son to murder someone if it was not to protect his love

I'm happy Dracos scars have been shown to the one person he loves for I feel there is some walls now that have fallen and he can show everything to Hermione that she deserves to know to make them complete or rebuild their own walls or make even their fantasy of a cardboard box come true for even at the end the day if you have love you are a wealthy man and draco understand this and for that I thank you and for his advice to goyle for so many people do not understand the meaning of real love and I hope he finds someone to love him and he becomes some what happy in his time .

Thank you again dark whisper for this has been yet another wonderful read and I look forward to whichever you update first as they are amazing

I leave you with a proverb from my homeland

An rud is annamh is iontach = a thing that is seldom is wonderful
Your fan sinead ( romance4ever)

Author's Response: Sinead, you sweet, sweet person,

Thank you for your wonderful poem that you offer to me for condolences. I have heard of it and it is truly beautiful to think of those lost in that way. It is so nice of you to send this me. It is heartfelt as well as deeply personal. I appreciate it so much. I feel like I have been hugged from someone very far away. *sigh* Thank you.

Regarding this chapter, I just love your comments and insight into Narcissa and Lucius. Since she is your favorite, I am glad that I have been writing her correctly in your eyes. I too think there is love in their relationship no matter how cold Lucius portrays himself. And I specifically remember seeing Narcissas face when she saw the aftermath of Voldemort finding out the cup was taken. Even Griphook lie on the floor as the sword disappeared from his hand (as well as several others that did not survive it). It appeared to me that maybe something within her changed as she knew Voldemort was deranged and needed to be taken out somehow. I believe she was fearful, but she saw too many evil things and loved Draco so much to do what she did in the end. She is a woman who loves her son, not unlike Lily, in my mind.

And I agree with you about Lucius as well. He is worried about Narcissa so much so that he wants Draco to murder someone to protect her. He knows his wife well and knows she is hiding her worry underneath her beauty... and yet he knows.

Regarding his scars, I have not decided yet if I am going to have him tell her the truth or if she will figure it out. I am still in the writing and editing phase, so time will tell once I sort it all out. She will know, I am just not sure how bluntly it will come about.

I am so glad that you mentioned Goyle. He is mean and cruel, but deep down in him is a craving for someone to just love him. I do have my plans for him...

The other story I was working on is finished, so hopefully I will have time to continue this story. The next chapter has been challenging for me write. I had to step away from it for awhile, but will be picking it back up.

My apologies for taking so long to respond. Wonderful reviews like yours are the hardest for me. I tend to read them over and over again and I never know what to say. Thank you is just not enough.

Thanks again for the virtual hug and the poem. And finally, for your quote. Irish Gaelic?! I truly do not know what to say. It is such a compliment... Thank you.

Romance4ever, indeed...
Dark Whisper

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