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Review:HowlnmadHowie says:
I wonder if you given thought to my suggestion of expanding your reader base. I confess I don't check HPFF as often as I used to since I came upon ffnet. But I do check in for the authors who still write here.
Anyhow it occurs to me I have to read back to remember whose owl Kyne belongs to.
I'm just curious, when I glanced at previous chapter the lirary Pixies were pink. The one turning pages for Dumbledore was blue. Are you suggesting the pixies of the library have different colors? Provided, of course, that they are actual Pixies but it's possible to suggest the blue is a cross between the pink and Cornish variety. I mean the Pxies from Lockarts's class were all blue. The only other explanation for the disrepency of color is that it reflects gender of the pixies.
The only other thing of note is that I would've expected Ron, Harry, and Ginny would have reveled to the rest of the Weaselys of the Quidditch pitch and equipment they discovered. If Harry is planning to update the equipment he should donate the older stuff or keep it in a collector's area in the Manor somewhere. Perhaps move it with copies of the photos to a Qudditch or sports entertainment room.
The last thing I wanted to add was that I would've thought Harry would've summoed Kreacher to the Manor to ask about the locket. But I suppose you want to address it later but best not put it off if Harry remembers Dung has been nicking stuff from Grimmauld Place.

Author's Response: I have considered your suggestion, I just unfortunately have not acted on it yet. I already have this story at three sites and the prospect of managing a fourth feels a bit cumbersome. However, I am considering abandoning one of the current sites as the updates are painfully slow.
Yes I am suggesting that the Library Pixies, if they are indeed actual Pixies, come in multiple colors (pigmentations) so far we have seen only two, one pink and another blue, we will likely see more of them in further chapters after Harry's Birthday.
As far as the Quidditch Pitch goes, it would be visible from the Manor patio so that it exists is not secret to the rest of the family. And I anticipate that the older equipment will indeed be donated, and or preserved once they update to new equipment.
And, yes, we will be getting to Kreacher soon.
Thanks for reading and commenting, and as always, thanks again and happy reading!


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