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Review:FredWeasleyIsMyKing says:
Hello lovely :)

Okay since you told me about your Georgilina obsession I have been dying to read these and I'm so glad I have more to go to after this one :D

I absolutely adored this one-shot, my heart really went out to George. Gah - he's so broken without Fred. Why did JK have to kill Fred? I don't think I will ever come to terms with it!!

I loved all the characters you brought into this as well (bar one but I will discuss her after) Alicia and Lee made me laugh and I liked the part you brought in about her helping to fix him. It showed people being able to get on with life after the war and that's so great. Hmm Oliver Wood. I have to admit I have a soft spot for him in the books and I adore any fanfic that includes him so yay for that!! The only person I didn't like (and it has nothing to do with your writing by the way... you did it well I just don't like her) is Natasha. Eugh. She just isn't someone George should be with and everyone can see it and so I hope when I go and read your other story George will see it too and be with Angelina like he should be :)

I loved the conflicting emotions you created for George within this piece. Wanting to go to and be with Angelina as well as not. It was wonderfully written - you really got across George's emotion.

I also wanted to mention the bit you wrote about George killing someone in the battle of Hogwarts. I've never really seen this issue come up before in a story and I think what you've written is so realistic. I'm sure most of the characters would struggle to come to terms with killing a person, even in the situation they were in where it's kill or be killed! I just wanted to commend you on it as I thought it was excellent!

Gah - the ending was lovely :) When she threw herself at him I was doing a little dance inside!! I just loved it and when you mentioned Natasha scowling I wanted to evil laugh in her face for being mean. Sorry, I just don't like her! the last line was one of my favourites where it's always been Angelina for him, again with the sweetness and loveliness, it just makes me smile inside!

I love your obsession with George... it kind of matches mine for Fred :) I figure if we pretend Fred never dies then the four of us can live happily haha. Oh I wish :)

Well done on a fabulous story my dear, I'm sure you can expect more reviews from me soon!!

Lauren :)

Author's Response: Hey!

I have such a strong Georgelina obsession and I just can't seem to shake it no matter how hard I try. There's just something about George Weasley that makes me get all fuzzy on the inside. Could it be love? Hahaha.
Thanks so much for coming to this one-shot! This is the only one-shot that I've gotten that has so many reviews and I thought that that was so shocking! Its actually quite dark and I didn't think that too many people would enjoy the nature of George so different.
I had to add in all of George's friends because I wanted to show just how much everyone had changed, and how he was having such a hard time dealling with it. It was harder to grasp their issues versus his own though but I managed to plow through really well. Alicia and Lee all the way! :D I love that couple, I hardly see it on the archives and anything with Oliver Wood makes me happy too. :D
Oh, Natasha. So many complaints about her for this one-shot, for "This is Angelina..." where this actually comes from...
People despise her. I can't blame them at all when she's such an icky character but the fact that she's so different from Angelina is apparent.
Perhaps I did it on purpose? :3
Oh, thanks for mentioning the fact that George had killed someone. For some reason, that's an issue that I've never really seen on the archives and I'm not sure why. I'm pretty sure that it would be painful for the survivors and that's a major issue with George. He had never hurt anyone before and he didn't have his brother to help him through and felt estranged from his family. So he was suffering so much. Poor dear.
Hahah, yay for Angelina! She did throw herself at him but its hard not to forget about Natasha and squeal with delight. Its completely all right that you don't like Natasha, she's not the easiest person TO like.
Ah, that last line always makes me happy too, it sums up the entire one-shot wonderfully. But, if you wanted to read "This is Angelina," you get more on what happened afterward from Angelina's POV. "Memories" is a coming of age thing from George's POV and its pretty all right so far. :D
I can't thank you enough for coming back to read my work! You're far too nice to me and it makes me so happy! :D
Hugs and kisses.
Much love,
Gabbie


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