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Review:Secret Santa says:
It's been a while since I've read a Cedric fic, so this was quite nice change of pace. There was a time a couple of years ago, when Cedric was much more popular in fanfics, but I guess next generation stuff kind of took over after that.

I actually made a banner for this fic, but now on the second reading I realize, that I may have put too much focus on the ending of it instead of the maze part, that is much more important for the story. If you agree with me, then I can make the better banner for you tomorrow. :)

Yeah, but back to the story. Cedric's inner musings were fun to read when he wandered around the maze. It was maybe a bit choppy one-shot, because the scene changes were bit abrupt. Other than that, it was easy to read, and although I already knew how it would end, you still managed to keep the suspense factor high.

There were some additional spaces between text that could be edited out, but it's no biggie. I loved your similes, especially a comparision of death to a bird was really cool one. In a way it's kind of fun idea that he hated greenery so much, considering who their head of the house is. :) I loved how the Hufflepuff spirit came through in this fic. There are not many stories about Hufflepuffs, which is kind of shame. Being a good guy and loyal one to boot may not be fashionable, but Cedric was a cool kid.

Toodles!

Super Secret Santa :P

Author's Response: Hello :)

Thank you so much for a lovely review and thank you so much for the banner - I love it! I don't think it needs changing at all - I really love it.

I'm really glad you liked the story. I never thought about his head of house when writing it! Whoops! I love Cedric in the books and was so gutted when he died. He was awesome!

Thank you for your suggestions - I will go back over and take note of them!

Thanks for a great review and banner!
Lauren


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