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Review:LittleMissPrincess says:
NO NO NO NOPE SORRY 500% DONE
okay this whole chapter is SO not cool. okay no. this is downright terrifying.
this only good part (okay no, thats rude. what i mean to say is, the only happy part) was all the starving artists references tucked and stuffed in there.

its like AU: the cast of staving artists/weather for ducks and blunderland are parallel universes to each other.

well anyway, THIS CHAPTER WAS SO SCARY :( I DONT UNDERSTAND WHY THE MINISTRY OFFICIAL WAS GOING TO CALL SOMEONE TO 'DEAL' WITH FLORA.
THIS IS SO SCARY. like, i know the whole point of all this is to be like how it was in the old days, but someone got penalized for just being a muggle-born?
i feel slightly stupid for asking, because i mean , i know that used to happen, but just seeing it happen again is making my feels hit the over load.

okay so you dont understand how important it is for you update soon like do you understand, i hope you do because otherwise i will have creys.

okay bye!
also one more thing : ARGH CLIFFHANGER!
now bye for reals.

Author's Response: you think you're 500% done with this story, believe me, I am 1000% done with it...

heh. twas once a night on skype when I hypothesised that this was the book Lucy went on to write after being paid an advance by a YA publishing company to write something 'fluffy and romantic with a serious message' and she just thought 'you know what why don't we stick a bit of violence in this' and LO! blunderland.

nah, it's okay! it does get cleared up a bit later on. the thing is: they don't really want Flora. 'dealing' with her would just be roughing her up, a bit of memory modification, the like. they're actually after scorpius. more to come on that in later chapters~

I have the rest of the story prewritten and awaiting edits and should hopefully be updating once a week from now on :3

sorry to enrage you further but I believe the next two chapters also end on cliffhangers...I'm just evil like that.

adios! ♥


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