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Review:justonemorefic says:
BAHAHAH HIS STUDENT IS CRABBE HOW EMBARRASSING. I love how Dumbly is just casually eavesdropping -- so sassy, Dumbledore -- and judging from afar. And proffering wisdom at the same time. He's a multitasker.

AHH AND HIS WORDS ON LILY ARE SO WELL SAID. I love this poetry in her, I suppose, punishment in winning. And I noted this before, but I couldn't quite find the proper words for it, but yes, it's prevented her from moving on. But he says it much better. “Winning has prevented her from healing. Her old wounds are ripped open nearly once a year, making her perpetually unfulfilled, unsatisfied.”

Ooh, and he raises the question of what really happens when they go 'on' (refrain from singing celine dion), because I was wondering about the validity of that too; I noticed it was hearsay.

“With that attitude, I wouldn’t tell you the temperature.” so much sass in CC.

omg I love that Salazar hates Dumbledore for those reasons, because I can kind of understand him for it, even if the reasons are petty. Omg his love for his basilisk. Salazar almost smiled. The afternoon was finally starting to look up! HE IS SUCH A JAFAR FROM ALADDIN. That's actually how I imagine him.

EE A CAMERA. Ok after Dumbledore's pep talk I am now solidly rooting for Colin! I hope he goes back to earth to take photos and stuff.

AHH MOODY'S PARANOIA IS MAKING ME PARANOID BY BRINGING UP ALL THESE QUESTIONS I PREVIOUSLY WONDERED ABOUT BUT FORGOT. I was also heavily sideeyeing Cliodna because we know so little about her, except her creepy bird pecked face. MAYBE SHE EATS THE SOULS. SHE'S THE DEMENTOR QUEEN. ok the 2am is showing.

Aww, and Tonks stays compassionate ♥ ok ok I should stop now. perhaps. Julia says it's worth staying up the rest of the night but I probably still won't finish it then :'D

♥ WILL BE BACK SOON~~~

Author's Response: IT REALLY WOULD BE EMBARRASSING TO HAVE CRABBE AS A MENTEE. Sassy Dumbledore, lol. When you say that I just picture Dumbledore flipping his beard over his shoulder, hands on his hips. "Oh no you /didn't/!"

Dumbledore silently knows something's up with this tournament but doesn't test Cliodna because he's just chilling in CC. He's on holiday. IT'S COLIN'S PROBLEM NOW. lol typical Dumbledore style, chilling out while a teenage boy grapples with his problems. IMMA JUST LET YOU TAKE CARE OF THIS, COLIN. HERE, I'LL GIVE YOU A CRYPTIC SPEECH AND YOU CAN MAKE WHAT YOU WANT OF IT. I TRUST YOU TO READ BETWEEN THE LINES AND INTERPRET IT CORRECTLY.

Jafar from Aladdin, god this whole story is just Aladdin. Scrimgeour is Raja and the sultan is Dumbledore.

Rooting for Colin, woo! You and Julia are the Colin cheerleaders.

MOODY QUESTIONS EVERYTHING. Dementor queen loool.

♥ I WILL SEE YOU SOON AS WELL. AND BY THAT I MEAN IMMEDIATELY BECAUSE THERE'S A LOT MORE REVIEWS LEFT. HOW HAVE I ONLY ANSWERED TWELVE OF THEM IT FEELS LIKE A HUNDRED.



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