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Review:Secret Santa says:
Santa's back to show a little house pride ! :) And Rudolph wanted to know about Dragons ;)

Ohh, I like the idea of Neville being an Auror, that's soo different to everything I've read, but yet, the way you explained it made it seem like that was he true calling.. I really like the way you referred back to his feelings and ideas back when he was still at Hogwarts; I think it makes him seem more realistic as a character.

It made me laugh how Neville thought it was all a prank at first, and suppose after sharing a dorm with them for so long at Hogwarts would have that effect.

I like how he's intimidated when he gets to the Dragon Research Bureau, it seems really realistic to me. I guess I would be a bit confused if he just strolled in there and acted as if he owned the place..

I have a quick question: Id the Dragon Research Bureau of your own creation, or not? Because I've never heard of it before but I could be wrong..

What I like about it though, is at the end, where the woman suggests that they aren't using the dragons as protectors, but they're keeping them for their blood. I think it’s a really good way to do that, hw at the end she finally tells him, after she puts him through the big ordeal of being next to the dragon etc. only to tell him, the Auror department probably won't ever encounter them.. For me it just makes me laugh, especially as Neville previously thought he was going on a wild goose chase, which in some ways it kind of is.

Anyway, we're lucky to have you in Gryffindor, as it's an excellent piece of writing, and you've done us all proud *hug*

Time to go now Rudolph…
*neigh*

Thank you for being such a great Santee to have :)

Happy new Year!
Love, Santa xx

Author's Response: The Dragon Research Bureau was mentioned a few times - I'm not sure if it was explicitly mentioned in the series itself, but it certainly was in interviews/extra information from JKR and probably also in Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them. It's part of the Beast Division at the Ministry. It was really just mentioned briefly, though - I've filled in the blanks myself.

Thank you so much for your lovely reviews, Santa! :) I'm really glad you liked this!


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