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Review:justonemorefic says:
Lily you saucy wench. Literally.

And then Cedric with his -- omg did he really bring up Quidditch. -shakes him- Cedric get a life (badumtssh).

And Peter all clever and out to prove himself. Still trying to impress the boys in death. no one knows how to let gooo. Hah, trying to pickpocket. You are still as stupid as ever, rat. The crewman patted at his suddenly heavy pocket, discovering his money and key. I loved this detail.

OH MY GOD. LILY'S OUT. OMG THAT WAS THE MOST. HEARTBREAKING. Okay lies, there are so many heartbreaking moments in this entire fic that I can't even choose. But Snape looking at her, wanting to see her when he can't /see/ her, and their short exchange, I HEARD SO MUCH BUT THERE WERE ONLY THREE LINES OF DIALOGUE??? And James' taking her out was really so bittersweet, and I don't know how to tell you how vividly I saw -- and felt -- everything.

♥ ♥ ♥

Author's Response: lololol originally I had Lily wearing much worse, and then I was like IS THIS TOS? CAN I GET INTO TROUBLE FOR MAKING HER LOOK LIKE A PROSTITUTE. So I diluted it a little.

Peter is a bit of a dark horse here. Everyone had him pinned as easy to beat, but he's an expert at self-preservation.

AND LILY'S OUT. SO MUCH FOR TONKS vs. LILY. I love twists. :3 If I'd kept Lily in, she would have dominated everything. Now that she's out, there's no telling who will win and who will lose. Except for you. You could tell because you already know.

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