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Review:EnigmaticEyes16 says:
This was an interesting one-shot. I like how you've transformed Narcissa into this time-worn, tired woman. She's got two men she cares about and both of them have sort of abandoned her; Lucius is in prison and attacked her, and her son moved to Paris.

I really liked the scene between Lucius and Narcissa though after she finds out he's dying, even though it was sad. I thought it was a really sweet gesture for him to ask her to come visit simply so he could apologize and tell her loved her. It was a bittersweet kind of ending.

This was a great one-shot and I really enjoyed it.

Again, I hope you had a wonderful holiday!

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for reading and reviewing! I am so glad you were my Secret Santa :)

Its good to know that you liked this one-shot, and Narcissa. And yes that is very correct she is sort of abandoned, and I am glad I got that across :)

I worked hard on the Lucius/Narcissa dying scene so its nice to know you liked it. I love bittersweet endings so I am glad you liked it too!

Thanks again for the review! I shall respond to all your reviews soon!

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