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Review:EnigmaticEyes16 says:
Surprise! I am your Slytherin Secret Santa!!!

I LOVED this story. I read it before but for some reason I never reviewed, but I guess that's a good thing because if I'd R/R everything of yours then I wouldn't have a clue what to do for your gift.

But, yes, this story is amazing. First off, I love how you've given Hermione something she can't find. I know she sometimes struggles remembering things she'd read for serious things, like Nicholas Flammel... but since homework always seemed so easy for her, I'm glad that she's been given something she can't find in a book. I enjoyed seeing a frustrated Hermione.

And I love how George just waltzes up to her and automatically expects her to find him what he's looking for instead of doing it himself. Although, George seemed very serious about hating liars and that bit seemed weird to me. I don't know why. I can't really think of a time when he or Fred blatantly lied, but it just seemed off.

Other than that, I really like your AU George who's into Hermione. I think he's like the perfect guy. He's sweet and caring, but also passionate and rough. I very much enjoyed the length juicy bits of this story. I thought it all had a really good flow to it. The writing of the scenes never became awkward or confusing. It was very easy to follow and the intensity of it had me glued to my seat til the end. It was perfect.

I would have enjoyed it though if, when George reminds her of her essay, she really did jump up to return to her homework. It would have been such a good laugh. Although I do love the bolder, and less homework-oriented Hermione she becomes in such a short period of time. It's very risque of her, which is a new side of Hermione we don't always see.

So yeah, all in all, I thought this was a wonderful one-shot!

Sorry these reviews are a little late. I hope you had a great Christmas and that you have a Happy New Year.


Author's Response: Hey!! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Haha I am glad you liked this so much.

I like writing a frustrated Hermione, so its nice to know you enjoyed reading her!

Oh well, I had to add in something weird to make everything work, didn't I? I'll see if I can tone down George's dislike for liars a little bit when/if I edit it!

Haha I like my AU George too. What I wouldn't do to have him in my life xP I am always worried about the writing flow and such, especially when it comes to the "juicy" bits, so good to know that you think it was all okay! Your use of the word "perfect" just made my day :D

Haha it sure would have been a nice laugh, but oh well its AU Hermione, and for once she shouldnt think about homework xP

I am glad you liked this. Thanks a ton for all the wonderful reviews you left me! They made my holiday so much nicer :)

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