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Review:Dark Whisper says:

This is very different and very creative and sad, really. You know how much I love reading sad fiction, right? I love something that gives me that 'awe' moment and you certainly delivered.

You gave us a very unique backstory... a girl that could not be remembered because of a jealous witch long ago. She was most certainly 'Cursed' and with something that was very interesting and refreshingly different. I'm not sure if the curse was given to you in the challenge or it was your idea, but regardless, you wrote it really well.

You broke my heart when you wrote that she... "finally done something that was truly memorable." Awe... boo hoo. ;( It actually had me wondering if I've ever done anything to be remembered... other than for embarrassing moments, I don't think so. :/

It is right and wonderful that she be remembered for saving Harry. Wah!

I could imagine the sadness this girl's life must've been. It is beyond the norm and wonderfully unique and believable as it is set in the magical world.

I wish you much luck with this challenge.

Thanks for this unique read...
Dark Whisper

Author's Response: Dark,

Thank you for reading my little one shot. Yes, it was for a challenge and I really liked the idea behind the challenge.

I think that some people are handed the short end of the stick at a young age and do what they can to defeat what drags them down. I really hope that I showed that in this story. I think that we don't truly know what happened at the final battle. Someone unknown could have saved Harry. JK gives us room for imagination!! :)

Thank you again for reading and leaving another awesome review!!


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