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Review:Siriusly89 says:
Hello! Siriusly89 here with your requested review :D

Before I begin, I just want to warn you that I review AS I read so it can get a bit disjointed at times :P

Okay, hold the phone! Teddy had an affair with DOMINIQUE? And then he has the gall to propose to VICTOIRE? He has some neck! And Dominique with her 'I'm so sorry', I did not blame Victoire for slapping her! I would have too!

I loved the confrontation between her and Teddy! And how Teddy was all confused and again with the 'Im so sorry' I really would have loved if Victoire slapped him too, but you can't have it all :P

This was a really, really well written piece! I loved how you showed the betrayal, how you went into depth in both Victoire's grief and anger, you got the balance brilliantly! I really like this!

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Haha, I love your reactions xP I can understand why you think Teddy and Dom deserved to be slapped. My main aim was for my readers to sympathise with Vic and that was fulfilled so I am glad xD I would like if you could read the prequel to this (Ending It) which is from Teddy & Dom's POV and see what you think!

Anyway, thanks so much for your review. I am happy to know you liked it so much!

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