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Review:Santa/NewYearFatMan says:
Ho Ho - it's Santa/NewYearFatMan!

Uhoh. This doesn't sound good. Rose = unaware jealous friend who'll ruin the date to put him off Molly (not realising it's actually for her)?

OR

Dom = cousin who ropes in all other cousins and will spy on the 'date' where they'll all watch Scorpius get put down? (:()

Intriguing. I really like your gentle humour - it's not in my face, or cringe-worthy humour. But it's simple, and I like it. Poor Molly though - I like Molly Weasley II! She always seems to get the bad end of the stick!

The flow carries on well from the last chapter, and there are no awkward sentences that caused me to stop or stutter over the words. I'd love a couple more details (ages, houses etc etc), but I'm sure they're coming soon.

Good Job! Happy New Year!

Author's Response: Hii! (:

Haha already coming up with a bunch of solutions! There really are so many directions this story can go in, lol.

I'm glad you like the humor, thats really good to hear :) and I know! Don't worry, Molly will get some good things coming her way (: you'll just have to read and find out!

That's good to hear that it flows nicely and aren't any awkward spots, I'm glad it's reading well!

Thank you, thank you, thank you for all your reviews and the siggy you made for me, Santa! You made my first Gryffindor Secret Santa very fun and I'm glad you seemed to enjoy my stories! :D

-Amanda


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