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Review:Dark Whisper says:
Meg,
Oh, you wrote a Scorpius/Rose. It is lovely. You wrote her very well. It was really tragic that she felt even her love Scorpius had turned against her.

You pulled me along quite well, having me wonder what she was doing in trying to escape and what was going to happen.

I really felt for Scorpius and I LOVE that you had him believing that his father would come around eventually and was only deeply disappointed, not trying to kill them. I love it because I love Draco (as you fully well know). LOL!

You could really tell that he didn't want to keep Rose in the hospital, but he really didn't have a choice. I could really feel that he loved her and I loved reading his character.

I hope that she really is 'cured' and doesn't have a relapse later on. The poor dears... heartbreaking.

You did an excellent job, Meg. You deserve more reviews. :)

Sincerely,
Dark Whisper

Author's Response: Dark,

Aww... You are too kind to me...

I think it is funny but I once had a dear friend tell me that you should only write from personal expirence. I think that logic is slightly flawed but there is a note of truth to it. A wrote this story because I have dealt with a family member who has a "Broken Mind" He was smart and had a lot going for him until that one day. But most of my one shots are based on actually expirences. I know you have a few that are close to your heart too.

I'm so glad to read that you liked this one-shot. Thank you so much for leaving a review too. I really means much to me to read your reviews.

Meg


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