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Review:Secret Santa! says:
Ho Ho! It's the Santa-turned-New-Year-Fat-Guy and HE HAS PRESENTS (or New Year leftovers from Christmas ;) )

I love how overly dramatic Scorpius is - it just adds to the sweet humour of the opening chapter. The plot itself made me giggle - it's corny, but potentially hilarious!

The story flowed really well and I love how upfront Scorpius is. I'm so grateful you skipped over the whole 'I don't like her, really I dont' plotline - they drive me crazy :P Scorpius is to the point and that really adds to his character.

It'll be interesting to see how the plan goes - though the general cockiness makes me a little suspicious that everything won't go to plan :P

I also like that you involved Molly - she's so often forgotten (and is one of my favourite Next Gen characters). She wasn't snobby or catty, but still held a slight tremor of 'Percy-nitus'. Very well characterised. :)

Anyway, very intriguing chapter!
Happy New Year!

Secret Santa :)

Author's Response: Hello, again, Santa! :D

Yay, I'm glad you like it so far! I really wanted to go for a fluffy kind of story and it just popped out of my head this way :P

Haha those drive me crazy too! It's either you like them or you don't... pick one! lol

Ahh, you like to guess don't you? Guess you'll have to keep on reading! ;)

Yeah, I love Molly too! I don't like seeing her in such negative light all the time and I wanted to add her into this story to give it some drama and difference :)

thanks for the review, all of them are so sweet(:

-Amanda


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