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Review:Bryarly says:
Well, as beginnings go, I've definitely read worse.

I don't think I feel particularly. I mean, that wasn't supposed to be a whole sentence but I don't know what to think.

Its fairly obvious who the dog, wolf, stag and rat are, that's fine, and I like the assessment by your main character, the first person point of view is generally my favourite; I visualise better when there's that, and I can identify with that sort of ineternal monologue, so that's great.

And then the wolf bit her.

Now. I get that to have my questions answered, I need to read more, so I'm gonna go do that.

Still... I mean, it's a prologue, it grabbed my attention... That's what they're for I suppose.

8/10

Bryarly :)

Author's Response: Thanks, I really appreciate this review!


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