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Review:Your Secret Santa says:
Hi again

Wow. Once again you wrote something very different from everything else you've written. This was . . . mysterious in some ways. When I finished reading it, I had several questions about Florence and the happenings. I don't really understand who she betrayed, but I'm not really sure if I'm supposed to or not. I guess I'm just not that good at that whole "use your mind when reading" thing. I just really didn't get some of it, but I don't know if it was intentional or not. But I still liked it.

What makes this amazing is Florence. She is really characterized well. I love how she feels so guilty and awful for whatever she did. And how it seems to haunt her. She can't forget what she did, so it obviously has to be something really bad. And what I actually enjoy the most, is that she fact that I can't help but empathize with her. It just seems like her past actions is ruining her life, because she can't forget it or forgive herself. She lives in regret, and it just seems like she wants to escape it all. She wants death so she can be free from the guilt and pain, so she can finally have peace.

Okay, I read what you wrote as an answer to one of the other review and I know understand what she did that was so wrong. But I actually liked it before I understood it, but its even better now. I hope to see more of this in the future. I would really like to know more about Florence.

- Your Secret Santa

Author's Response: I'm really happy that you think my writing changes and i branch out with my writing. I've always thought myself to sort of write the same genre's the same way over and over again.

This piece ended up being weird. I'm not really sure what it is and i'm not overly happy with it. I'd like to go back and edit it at some point, however i haven't felt inspired to do so yet. The story i plan on writing for this is sort of on the back burner until i finish one of my other WIP's. It will take a lot of work and a lot of research however i'm glad you are looking forward to it. It will make this moment even more clearer for sure.

Thank you for your review on this and that you liked it, even if it was really ambiguous. :P

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