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Review:Arithmancy_Wiz says:
Gah! I just realized after I posted the last review that I meant to say how much I loved the way you handled the idea of Xeno dating a muggle. I can't recall very many other stories around here where a wizards tells a muggle about magic and the muggle all but rolls their eyes and exasperatedly tells the other person they are crazy. But with the way you've portrayed Xeno, it just works so well. He's just odd enough that she can blow it off as just an annoying flight of fancy. Most other characters would either be accused of lying or of going of the deep end.

I guess what I'm trying to say (though not very succinctly) is that you've developed such a wonderfully unique character in Xeno that he feels both real and totally original. It's so nice to read about characters with this much depth to them.

As to this chapter itself, I loved the moment when Xeno and Capria look at one another and declare the other to be "strange." Coming from anyone else (like that terrible girlfriend of his), it might come off as an insult. But between the two of them, it's almost like a compliment.

And that potion... I'm starting to get a bit suspicious. Perhaps Capria knows the only "magic" Xeno really needs is a little confidence. I hope do so hope we'll see the two of them singing together in a future chapter.

-- your secret santa

Author's Response: It kind of worked out in his favor that his girlfriend blew it off as another of his quirks. I feel like he would've gotten into some genuine trouble if she would've believed him.

I never really decided whether the potions were real or not. I suppose that's up to interpretation. Though, even if she thought the potion was real, it might have had no real effect on Xeno anyway. She's not exactly an expert on potion making at this point. ;)

Thank you again for another wonderful review!


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