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Review:Arithmancy_Wiz says:
Another wonderful chapter! I think I'm starting to detect a pattern here :)

I'm continuing to love the way you're developing Xeno's character. It actually broke my heart a bit when he said, "But you mean so much to me, and I wanted to share it with you." His inability to read people is so tragic and yet so realistic. I think we've all met a few people in out lives who are like this. As terribly mean as his girlfriend is, you can still understand her frustration and impatience with Xeno -- her desire for him to just sort of "get with the program."

Capria is quickly growing on me too. There is so much of Luna in her. She's so unexpectedly insightful, just like Luna often is with Harry. I loved her line, "Muggles can't see what's right in front of their faces." Obviously she's referring to the potion-making, but it also worked on so many other levels -- that others can't see the wonder in the world the two of them see everywhere, the fact that Xeno's girlfriend can't see the wonderful man right in front of her... Okay, I'm running away with myself here a bit, but I do so love when a story has layers.

I'm loving the continued references to Xeno's brother too. The fact that he's getting engaged, making his rent payments, can easily relate to others... it makes Xeno's oddities only all the more apparent, emphasizing how he seems to always be just slightly out of step with everyone else.

I'm so, so glad I'm having the chance to read and review some of this story. It's really just lovely.

-- your secret santa

Author's Response: Seriously, you deserve several dozen hugs for such lovely reviews. Thank you for taking the time to read this story, and for reading so closely as to catch the little details. It means so much to me as an author to have a reader connect with the story in such a way. YOU are just lovely. :)

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