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Review:Arithmancy_Wiz says:
What an absolutely wonderful beginning to your story. It was perfectly enchanting from start to finish.

Your take on Xeno's character is so touching and sweet and sad all at the same time. His sort of dreamy inattentiveness and cluelessness with the woman at the start is endearing, and his inability to say 'I love you' is heartbreaking. And I love how you can see right away that she doesn't understand him -- demanding that he "concentrate" on her when he is in fact focused so intently on her eyes. It ever so subtly sets up the idea that he needs to be with someone who understands and appreciates his unusual quirks. And I loved the bit about him having the habit of "peeking" when they kiss. What a brilliant little aside. It really does say something about his...oddness.

I loved they way you introduced his talent for writing here as well. I never really thought about it before, but producing a newspaper -- being somewhat shielded behind it -- is such a perfect job for a man like him. You've laid the groundwork for the Quibbler so well here.

And just what is Capria up to? I assume she'll turn out to be Luna's mother, but what exactly does she have up her sleeve? I can't wait to read more and find out.

Happy Holidays!

-- from your (not so) secret santa

Author's Response: I'm so sorry it has taken me so long to respond to your reviews! I want you to know that I read them as soon as you left them and they made me so very happy. :)

I'm thrilled to hear that you're loving Xeno. I have such a soft spot for his character, and I'm glad I conveyed his quirks and imperfections in a positive light. I hoped it would come across the way.

Thank you again. You're so sweet!

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